todd
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Ben
Aug 23, 2006 14:54:02 GMT -5
Post by todd on Aug 23, 2006 14:54:02 GMT -5
Name: Ben
Age: 1 year
Gender: Male
Breed: Mutt, part beagle
Pack: West
Position:Normal Member
Appearence: Ben is a small dog, just barely out of puppy-hood. He has beagle like ears, and will grow up to be quite a big dog. He has a cute tail, with a curl on the end, and deep blue puppy eyes.
Behavior: Ben is just a puppy, learning to survive on the street. He wants to join a pack, but many dogs don't think he's old enough. He is usually happy, but can get very lonely. He loves people, but thought they were sort of a pain. That's why he's glad there are no owners in The Ashen City
History: A few months after Ben was born, he fell out of the "For Sale" box he was in. He wasn't the only one, his sister fell out too. Since then, he's been learning to suvive on the street. He is also constantly looking for his sister, Kiala.
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Ben
Aug 23, 2006 14:59:37 GMT -5
Post by :Akio: on Aug 23, 2006 14:59:37 GMT -5
Good, but it would be best if you could change up his Behavior a bit. It says alot about not being in a pack and wanting an owner [no humans here]. Thanks
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todd
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Ben
Aug 23, 2006 23:38:00 GMT -5
Post by todd on Aug 23, 2006 23:38:00 GMT -5
there, me fix again
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Ben
Aug 24, 2006 9:08:58 GMT -5
Post by :Akio: on Aug 24, 2006 9:08:58 GMT -5
Alright, better.
Accepted!
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